Rivkah: 2


Loving you is a journey that unravels
Knowing you is a quarry, full of marvels
I would peel off your layers like a dress
Underneath is virtue, not nakedness…

By Uncle Phil

Words Are Work … and fun too!

6 replies added

  1. Chizzy December 27, 2015 Reply

    Awww Uncle Phil.. I never knew your love for me is this deep

    • Uncle Phil January 2, 2016 Reply

      Yes Chizzy! Like a vein a precious metal thru a mountain, finding its way to my core. Lol

  2. amazing December 28, 2015 Reply

    Now this is the kind of poem I like……few lines and loaded too

    • Chisom December 29, 2015 Reply

      I know exactly what you mean. With his Rivkah series, Uncle Phil just continues to prove to us that concise still rocks!

  3. Yemie January 9, 2016 Reply

    Oh My Word!These lines are beautiful beyond words…sooo divine! And if by some chance Rivkah’s love lingo’s is Words of Affirmation, that’s it….she’s been totally had! Who can escape from such?! Honeyed words that’d go on to constitution ‘a weapon of mass seduction’?! Only, the Poet’s got eyes for Rivkah and Rivkah alone! He’s sooo into her, taken by her…..completely fixated on her! Rivkah….Lucky Duck! LOL

    I totally love this concept Uncle Phil but I just can’t seem to shake off the eerie feeling am getting! Like there’s more and its sooo far off from cute! But, we’ll just have to wait and see huh?! Well done to the powers of infinity! #laughing

    • Yemie January 9, 2016 Reply

      *constituting* Pardon the error! LOL

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